Contents page second draft and what improvements I have made

This is my second draft contents page. The improvements that I have done are:

• Move the image to the top left corner as it stands out more.
• Made clear headings
• Three different coloured fonts which link to the house style
• Looks more professional
• Added a main title to the contents page which is linked with the house style.

Double paged spread second draft and what improvements I have made

This is my second draft of the double paged spread. The improvements that I have made are:

• Adding thirds
• Moving the image to one side
• Making a bold heading
• Filter on the image
• Added another image

Front cover second draft and what improvements I have made

This is my second draft front cover of the magazine. The improvements I have made are:

• New images
• New colour of font
• Added more headings
• Changed the font
• Changed the masthead

Masthead

http://www.fontspace.com/chequered-ink/distortion-dos-analogue

First draft mark

After my first draft I will be needing to make a lot of improvements. These improvements are the text and font. I will need to vary my fonts over all three of the pages and the size of the text should be relevant. For example, the front covers main article should be in a bigger and bolder font then the rest of the front cover. Another main improvement will be to manipulate the images that I have. Doing these two main improvements will make my mark increase.