Double paged spread third draft and what improvements I have made

This is the third draft of my double paged spread. The improvements that I have made from the second to third draft are:

• Adding a main heading which covered both sides of the double paged spread
• Adding a gradient to the shape.
• Adding the shape to the left hand side of the double paged spread
• Taking away the names of the duo as it looked un-professional and un-like an indie magazine.