Front cover second draft and what improvements I have made

This is my second draft front cover of the magazine. The improvements I have made are:

• New images
• New colour of font
• Added more headings
• Changed the font
• Changed the masthead

Masthead

http://www.fontspace.com/chequered-ink/distortion-dos-analogue

First draft mark

After my first draft I will be needing to make a lot of improvements. These improvements are the text and font. I will need to vary my fonts over all three of the pages and the size of the text should be relevant. For example, the front covers main article should be in a bigger and bolder font then the rest of the front cover. Another main improvement will be to manipulate the images that I have. Doing these two main improvements will make my mark increase.

First draft

Images chosen for Andrew and Tom

The first image is going to be on the contents page and the second image is going to be on the double paged spread.

Images chosen for Aaron

This is the image that I am using for Aaron. I have made him wear a white shirt and also have a white background so text can stand out when on him.

Costumes